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In the Window |
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alicia_rose9 New Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 3 |
In the window darkly cleared seeing footprints just appeared. What could be this mystery, in this dark box I could see? Watching moonlight grow so fast telling the time that midnight has passed. Watching cats go by, that's the footprints that I see with my eye. In the window darkly cleared, seeing footprints just appeared -by alicia rose peri, 9 years old |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Alicia--You see out the window with a poet's eye. I enjoyed reading your poem..thank you! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good work, Alicia! I liked this.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
great job, sweetie!!!! here's *wink*.... he liked it too   |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
hey, you tell that little sweetheart I'm proud of her. I have a little girl and this is adorable. Takes after Mom huh? way to go Alicia! Robert |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you and your mother always write such beautiful poetry together, we're all so proud of you, sweet friend! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are an angel to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alicia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliciaRose~ ADORABLE ! I love the way the thoughts tiptoed to you~ You are a talented young lady~  *Big Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!  You have absolutely wonderful talent. I hope you keep sharing it with us and keep writing. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Alicia Such a lovely picture you have painted with your words. I was amazed to see you are only 9 years old and you should be so very proud of your writing. I have no doubt you have a very long future in writing and I wish you all the very best. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Brava, Miss Alicia! I toss roses at your feet! You are a very talented young lady--my daughter is 10 and writes poetry too, maybe you two could become poetry pen pals? If your mom says it's okay, let me know. I would love to see a duet by the two of you. (I used to write with your Mom all the time.) Keep up the good work! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
alicia_rose9 - wow, this is just great! A most lovely poem. My advice, never stop writing, you are very good... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful write Alicia - don't ever stop... jwesley |
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