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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-28 02:33 AM



For Practice Makes Perfect

~*Marge Tindal*~

Bring me gently into 'good morning'
with caresses waiting for me
Again at noon - if it's not too soon
for practice makes perfect you see

And surely before - a quarter to four
we'd have time for another session
that is unless ... with my heart
you happen to be messin'

Then perhaps again - at a quarter past ten
as the stars kiss the ebony still
I'll practice 'Coach' - honest I will
Then again in the mid-of-night,
perhaps we'll get it right

With caresses one-on-one
comes the sun in gentle array
I'll smile convinced
it's another love-filled day


Oh just try to wipe this grin off my face~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-11-28 03:35 AM


Now this sounds like a day I would enjoy! And I am so out of practice!
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2 posted 2001-11-28 03:49 AM


why wipe it ... I will give you a few more
                

Regards, Marge,
Sudhir
P.S. and of course this is a great one...  

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3 posted 2001-11-28 09:09 AM


Marge my dear, you write my heart so often  
and this is yet another!! *giggling*  

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4 posted 2001-11-28 09:10 AM



Something tells me that grin you can't wipe off doesn't need any practice, I'd say it was more of a permanent feature...

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5 posted 2001-11-28 10:42 AM


what is wrong with ten
two is a good time as well
or the eighth hour
midnight has always been good
anytime and all the time

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2001-11-28 10:46 AM


Marge--Well, all I can say is...you write so good in love!  Hugs to my sweet sister-of-heart!
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7 posted 2001-11-28 10:51 AM


*giggling* I am just glad you shared this grin with us. BRAVO!!! I love it!!!Keep practicing and the smile will never leave your face and with sparkle out of your eyes for all to see. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-11-28 05:15 PM


Thank you for sharing and I love that *grin*  

((hugs))

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9 posted 2001-11-29 09:26 AM


'Scuse me kids ~
I would have been back sooner ...
but had practice to attend~

Thankeeeee, all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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10 posted 2001-12-03 08:03 PM


This is very good. I just love reading your poems. Thank you for sharing it.
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-12-03 09:50 PM


Thanks .. that 'coach' is a task master for sure~

I so enjoy sharing this 'big love' with my friends~
I am overjoyed at being in this 'family of friends' ...
Happy holiday shopping to everyone !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2001-12-04 04:26 PM


Oh, gal... I wouldn't even think of trying to wipe the grin off your face. *S* I'll just sit here (jealous-hearted *G*) and enjoy the loveliness of your soul-deep smile... and smile with you. *S*
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13 posted 2001-12-04 05:10 PM


Oh, SweetSuthernGal~
It's some kinda wonderful~
Thank you sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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