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0 posted 2001-11-27 09:43 PM


Tit for tat..just some thoughts on retaliation.


Tom Wales worked diligently throughout the night
to curtail the spread of speeding bullets.
And the next day one stopped him in his tracks.

Karam farmers toiled long hours in the fields
to grow enough to feed their hungry children.
Next day torn apart by bombs of retaliation.

A Taliban man races past the corpses in the field
to re-enforce the hillside bunker so he can
have a piece of the action of retaliation.

She nurses a sore arm, twisted hard by a small child
unable to manage his anger and frustration.
She consoles his aching heart, in retaliation.

He picks up the baseball bat just thrown at him,
hands it back to the frustrated player, and asks,
"Was my call unfair? Do we need new rules out there?"

Retaliation.

May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

© Copyright 2001 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-27 10:04 PM


This is good....I really don't believe in retaliation...I leave that to God..HE gets 'em in the end.  
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2 posted 2001-11-27 10:10 PM


Exactly. My point being, to 'retaliate' with love and understanding. Not everyone agrees with this, I know. But I don't see any other way to stop the insanity, the seemingly endless cycle of kill, kill, kill. We need to arm ourselves with more compassion and less metal.  
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3 posted 2001-11-27 10:32 PM


I agree! When is the fighting and hatred going to end? I often ask myself if we'll ever have world peace, but only God knows if and when we will!
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4 posted 2001-11-27 10:50 PM


I do not believe in WAR,  yet I know it happens, and sadly in the end there are NO winners.....I have always said turn the other cheek, for some reason  I believe, that will get the enemy more then fighting.....this is powerful, and so well written....

PEACE

Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-27-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-11-27 10:57 PM


Rose Petal thank you for your reply.

Greeneyes, Hugs and Peace to you.  

During the 60's I wore a T shirt that said,

"War is nice not for children,
and other living things."

I wore that T shirt out, and need a new one. It seems as if many never saw that message, never took it to heart, or chose to ignore it. I may need several more T shirts in my lifetime.

May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

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