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In Tune |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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In Tune tonight, I shall meet you in your dreams with a promise to whisper, dance and scheme talk quietly about each others day and how we wish we could just run away leave this hectic world behind a magic place many seek to find slowing down a race to work we run precious time spent to make two…one I close my eyes to enter the place this exist place a hand in yours trying to assist pull back the curtains of the night light the candles to beckon and invite the music of heart beat fills the room could it be our souls are also in tune "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such a wonderful way to be in tune! I enjoyed this keeper.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I've written this one in blood!  enjoy.  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
To be in tune, what a beautiful thing. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - you can't know how I wish for your words to happen..... 'tonight, I shall meet you in your dreams with a promise to whisper, dance and scheme talk quietly about each others day and how we wish we could just run away' These words just really touched me very deeply, as it is exactly how I feel. Thanks for sharing this... BC |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very lovely write. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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