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Startime
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0 posted 2001-11-27 04:00 PM


Caress me with lovers lips,
leave a trail of your desire
Let us take generous sips
as we fan a brilliant fire

Let gentle fingers explore,
tenderness of your passion
Share dreamers world I implore
with a heart of compassion


Karen Torbiak 2001©



Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-27-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Domzi
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1 posted 2001-11-27 04:02 PM


Aww, how romantic and sensual.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-11-27 04:04 PM


Beautiful Karen! It's good to see you and Lunatic inspiring eachother like this!
Sensual poetry is coming out of it : )

lunatic
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3 posted 2001-11-27 04:05 PM


sweet invitation
accepted by heart softly
lips and hands employed

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

SEA
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4 posted 2001-11-27 04:07 PM


very nice and sensual  
Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-27 04:10 PM


Domzi...Thank you. I just couldn't resist the moon I am in...**hugs**

RosePetal...sometimes someones words just set me to dreaming and his did today. They were so sensually beautiful. I am glad you enjoyed this.

Lunatic...your words flow with such passion and gentleness how could they be resisted. You awoke words of desire in me. Thank you so very much. **big hugs**


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-27 04:11 PM


SEA...Thank you so much. The mood just took the words and wrote them. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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