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Dusty Rhodes
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0 posted 2001-11-27 03:27 AM


Touch my face in sweet caress
As our eyes drink in the swirling depths
Until we find what we both do seek
Of what others yearn in secret thought

In our hold, we will surely touch
The mysteries of life we wish to keep
For the moon will glow and the sun will shine
As the light of our love will remain with time

Walk beside and never behind
The white sands of forever stretching beyond
With the softness of breezes to carry along
The whispers we say in soft undertones

In all this life I searched for what is you
Until the thunderclap of look, brought heart's throb
And the world dissolved, only leaving the souls
Meeting again on the roadways of time

[This message has been edited by Dusty Rhodes (edited 11-27-2001).]

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-11-27 05:21 AM


I love the  soft undertones in this...
and
yearning in secret thought

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-11-27 04:28 PM



A common thread, time, what it brings, what it leaves behind...I like this, and to echo Maureen, soft thoughts, indeed...

very nice...

bslicker
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state of mind
3 posted 2001-11-27 04:36 PM


"Meeting again on the roadways of time"
Great ending line,
Great write all together.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-11-27 04:42 PM


Hi Dusty!  Great write here....nice and gentle....soft thoughts.  
Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-27 04:53 PM


A gentle passionate poem that flows over me like refreshing clear waters. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dusty Rhodes
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since 2001-10-14
Posts 27

6 posted 2001-11-27 07:09 PM


Thank you, Wynter, for your kind words. I appreciate them very much

Sunshine, you are very nice to respond, Thank you

Thank you Bernie for your read and nice reply

Nancy, I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for being here

Startime, what a kind thing to say, thank you



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