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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-14 05:09 PM


Hopefully In Love
With You


Let not your heart...
keep us apart.

For my heart...
wants to be close to you.

And as these two hearts...
come together as one

I find myself falling...
hopefully in love with you.


JamesLee
November14
2001


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1 posted 2001-11-14 05:16 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet James, Jin will be so lucky to love you always! (sigh) I hope this is true love, for your beautiful heart deserves the most beautiful love! (smiles) Oh James, I'm so happy for you! (big hugggssssss) May sweet love forever fill your heart, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-14 06:28 PM


James,

    This is so sweet.  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-11-14 06:30 PM


Simple and romantic, James.  Just the way it should be!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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4 posted 2001-11-14 06:30 PM


never thought of it expressed this way, hopeful....lovely words, and thoughts....be well be safe...


Greeneyes~




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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-14-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-11-14 07:14 PM


I like this play on the words, much better than hopelessly..
Keep thinking good thoughts.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-11-14 07:21 PM


With soft tender words so well expressed...
ain't no way love won't happen here...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-08-12 12:04 PM


Thank each of you for the wonderful responses...James
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