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Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

0 posted 2001-11-26 08:38 PM

Leaflets

When I see the leaflets of love
scattered about wind swept
paradises, doused in thoughts
never meant for an orchestrated
concert of eyes, beseeching
every crystal of affection launched
upon hearts desiring molded
treasures of intimacy cast
into the grains of their loneliness

I see a capsulated sadness
growing like a weed overwhelming
gripping like a vines anticipation
of saturation in a need for survival
teething hearts needing massage
receiving a sonnet of affection
reminiscing a Shakespearian hug
a fantasy with arthritic desires
because the leaflets were bare
of any truth

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-26 08:44 PM

*sigh* I hope any leaflets I write have the truth of my heart in them. This is a wonderful poem that makes the reader stop and think about what they are reading.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2001-11-26 10:11 PM

Good write my friend - but don't believe I'd see the same thing in the same leaflets. Pretty optimistic, I am.

jwesley

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2001-11-26 10:28 PM

wow..! very discriptive!

cool write..much enjoyed

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-11-26 10:38 PM

A beautifully descriptive write Amused Cupid ... wonderful phrasing throughout, very nicely written indeed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-11-26 10:52 PM

I like this very much...

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

6 posted 2001-11-27 11:43 AM

It is indeed sad when a person doesn't think about how their words or actions may affect someone before they say or do them.

Dawn

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