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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-26 05:28 PM


(This is for you...my sweet Joanna)

Lady Sparrow
By: Noah Eaton
11/26/01

She flies through my heart, evoking trills of sunshine
Silver inches curl up her soft feathers, flickering the lapis moonlight
Cooing gently, tucking me into her wings as she lands into my nest
My lady sparrow, twittering in joy, singing to the top of her breast

When I look into her eyes, I see the sparrow of my heart and me
Warbling with happiness as she lies naked in my arms in the spring breeze
Touching her bare flesh, she smiles, hearts pregnant with earthly lust
Caressing her breasts softly, breathing her sweet song of a thrush

Beside the crystal blue lake, I hold her close to my beating heart
As tumbleweed fantasies encircle us, blooming into orchids of shooting stars
Opening a concealed smile within, saving it to the day I meet my sparrow lady
Splendor gracing her body with rose petals, beading her body lovingly

O' sweet lady sparrow, my eternal valentine
You are my love, you are the heavens and my sunshine
Wear your silk crown, my sweet lady-love queen
To wake up next to you in the morning by your sweet kiss…is my sweetest dream

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-26-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-26 07:38 PM


This is beautiful Noah!!! You have some great imagery in this poem!    
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2 posted 2001-11-26 07:39 PM


Wow!! This was absolutely stunning Noah and I think you should be crowned the King of Romance after this wonderful piece.  What a lucky lady to have something so lovely written about her.  Take care.....Sue

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3 posted 2001-11-26 08:31 PM


OOOOOOOHHH wow...Noah, you are so wonderful, charming, cute, irresistable...I could go on and on and on but thank you so much for this. I am extremely lucky to have your one in a million LOVE! *kisses*

Love,
Lady Sparrow

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4 posted 2001-11-26 08:36 PM


*grin* you two are an absolute delight. This is so tender and loving, Noah. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-26 08:45 PM


Noah,

    I completely agree with the idea of crowning you the King of Romance. You write soooo beautifully... you're a joy to read my friend.  And the fact you have found a such a sweet soul to send it to makes it even better

Hugs,
Tara

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6 posted 2001-11-26 08:53 PM


Noah, I am so happy you have found someone as sweet as Joanna!  I pray your hearts sing together for all eternity!  
~hugs to you both, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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