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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-11-25 02:41 PM


A Lover's Waltz

With arms wrapped lightly, music will begin
these two lonely hearts connect from within
feelings stir and mix, their souls start to spin
they hold each other as love begins to win

Tighter with the highs, slower with the lows
their bodies in-sync as the music flows
fluid in motion as time only shows
growing emotions from unspoken prose

With arms wrapped tightly, not a note to be
they still continued, obliviously
their own sensations played about freely
in a Lover's waltz, heart to heart truly.


* I was inspired from Tracey's post
last night and pulled this from my
files to share ... thank you for the dance!!

*s



© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-25 03:37 PM


Oh Craig, this is music to my ears...
(reaching for your hand) may I have this dance sir?

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-11-25 04:03 PM


With arms wrapped tightly, not a note to be
they still continued, obliviously
their own sensations played about freely
in a Lover's waltz, heart to heart truly.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is soooo romantic Craig.  I love it when the music stops and you just keep on dancing....and don't even care if there is any music.    In fact, you danced with me like that last night at Tracey's party!! Oops, that wasn't you?
LOL....seriously, I really like this!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

ctowen
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3 posted 2001-11-25 04:31 PM


RP   -  most definitely!!

Nancy -  that was you!!! I was blinded by the the fireworks!!
         It was enchanting!! Thank you!

        

misguided angel
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4 posted 2001-11-25 04:50 PM


ctowen, seems like everyone wants to dance tonight!  
This is a beautiful story, I really enjoyed it.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

peaches73533
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5 posted 2001-11-25 05:32 PM


I loved this.
Peaches

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-11-25 06:23 PM


Nothing like a beautiful dance to stimulate the senses.
Sandra

ctowen
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7 posted 2001-11-25 07:06 PM


Misguided  -  It wasn't a story at the time,
              but carried that idea by the time it ended.
              Thanks for the response though...
              If you find your card has room for another,
              just tap me on the shoulder and I will be there!

Peaches  -  I am glad I could reach out and touch you so ...
            care to go for a spin?  

ctowen
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8 posted 2001-11-25 07:08 PM


Yes, you are so right ...
I think my dance card just filled up,
shall we??

Tracey
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9 posted 2001-11-25 08:28 PM


I am so glad my post inspired you to pull this one out Craig. I love your dance. This is a beauty indeed, so soft and tender. I see your dance card is getting mighty full...save one for me okay?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2001-11-25 09:24 PM


ctowen - thanks for sharing this one, as it reminds me of when I did a Lovers Waltz with someone very special...

BC

Eloise
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11 posted 2001-11-25 10:06 PM


What a lovely dance indeed.  I did enjoy this very much.  
ctowen
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12 posted 2001-11-25 11:00 PM


Bill  -  its a dance to remember isn't it!!!

Eloise  - I am glad you liked, grab someone near and listen to the music.

Tracey  -  I have your name at the top of the list,
           I told you, I was thinking of you.

           Just say when!!

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