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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-11-24 12:55 PM


When I feel alone, I truly am not
For I’m given  you, and no matter what.
Your memories shared ever in me stay
Even on my very loneliest  day.

I remember  sensual walks at night
times of passion for two  beside firelight
I see  sensual visions we know well
of times only you and I both can  tell.

Your softest  kiss stays here upon my cheek
giving me  happiness and joy I seek
I yearn strongly for your soft and light touch
‘Cause my dear, I love and need you so much.

Keeping you safely  in my  arms  we go
along this worn path where two  lilies grow
Leading you into the pure flowing stream
as we sleep,  living out our fondest dreams.

Come with me into our enchanted land
drifting on silver clouds both hand in hand
Bringing our children to this joyful feast
For my yearning of you all has not ceased.



© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-24 01:03 PM


Barry...as always very beautiful!
Enjoyed this piece on a day where I am trying to catch up on some wonderful poetry here at Passions. I have missed some in the daily hustle and bustle of life which grows ever busier with the approaching holidays.
Hugs, Nancy.

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

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2 posted 2001-11-24 01:08 PM


Thanx Nancy...happy to see your presence.
Guess the Magician is getting ready to poof
away.....have a happy day...

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3 posted 2001-11-24 02:05 PM


Magnus you are such a loveable man!
I hope the love you feel never goes away!
You always captivate our hearts with your romantic writes!

RP

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4 posted 2001-11-24 02:15 PM


Your lady is very lucky to have such devotion and it's wonderful to read this!

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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5 posted 2001-11-24 02:19 PM


A truly remarkable insight ...
instead of want, list what want not.
If you all ready have all you need
in love, the list grows short from there.
Another great piece Magnus.

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6 posted 2001-11-24 02:52 PM


Thanx RP...felt that this wuz just an
appropriate thing to write about...

Magnus
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7 posted 2001-11-24 02:53 PM


Thanx Kay...but sometimes I feel she deserves
even more...but we go on and continue to
grow together.

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8 posted 2001-11-24 02:54 PM


Thanx Craig, Yep,  it does get smaller...
But sometimes gets harder..

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9 posted 2001-11-24 04:13 PM


Trully romantic, great expression of love.
Magnus
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10 posted 2001-11-24 04:21 PM


Thank You Walker...happy you enjoyed this.
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11 posted 2001-11-24 05:01 PM


enjoy
Magnus
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12 posted 2001-11-24 09:41 PM


Thanx Vandana,  as always.
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