Soft Noise .......... Pearl's Song

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-22 08:59 PM

                                   Soft Noise
                                   (Pearl’s Song)

                                   singly sweet
                                   ancients’
                                   chained melody
                                   a poem dulcet
                                   as lovers met

                                   violin’s wire
                                   pianissimo note
                                   faint
                                   euphonious lyre
                                   operetta’s float

                                   harp’s song
                                   chorded pearls
                                   strung round
                                   love’s throat
                                   in silver swirl

                                   thoughts too
                                   fragile drift
                                   souls along
                                   chained melody
                                   Pearl’s song

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
22 November 2001

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-22-2001).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-22 09:45 PM

Karilea, this is so lovely and lyrical.
I really love it! Gentle as new fallen snow.
hugs, Nancy.

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-22 09:50 PM

A melody of sound made with words. This is very beautiful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mysteria

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3 posted 2001-11-22 10:02 PM

Oh my, how very pretty this one was. I loved how delicate it felt as I read it Sunshine.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Balladeer

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4 posted 2001-11-22 11:22 PM

yes, delicasy is indeed the feel this poem conveys....lovely.

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-11-23 03:11 PM

                                   singly sweet
                                   ancients’
                                   chained melody
                                   a poem dulcet
                                   as lovers met

                                   violin’s wire
                                   pianissimo note
                                   faint
                                   euphonious lyre
                                   operetta’s float
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yes...i must agree with my fellow poets...
this is indeed delicate..lacy...fragile.
it lingers sweetly like a fragrance...
like a melody playing in the back of ones mind that is attached to a special memory....
or a whisper from a lover.
And the beautiful poetic vocabulary adds to its impressive pleasures.
this is lovely K...and further proof of the gems I am missing with my computer problems of late.
*sigh* so much poetry...so little mothy time

I would wait till the end of time for you,
Then do it all again ... it's true.
I can't measure my love for you,
There's nothing to compare it to.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-23 04:50 PM

Sung well...all of the instruments...I like
how you do this...in spite of some of the
words requiring me to break out my Websters.

Thanx Karilea.

Pell
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7 posted 2001-11-23 05:24 PM

Wonderful... I can hear the soft music as I read.

Martie

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8 posted 2001-11-23 06:47 PM

Karilea--To hear the sound she makes..your poem sings it. Beautiful!

rwood
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Tennessee

9 posted 2001-11-25 07:29 AM

This feels so victorian with such softened flair. Like a blushing bride to be. This is very lovely Sunshine. Saving this. It would be a beautiful write within a framed victorian piece of art!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Denise

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10 posted 2001-11-25 08:00 PM

This is exquisite, Karilea! Very beautifully done!

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