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Passion Is Fleeting
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Passion Is Fleeting |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Passion is fleeting An untouchable emotion Discreet as a greeting Sometimes great as an ocean Such unimaginable feelings Lift you straight to the ceiling So often the predecessor of love Lingering briefly on the wings of a dove Can be youth's lifetime endeavor Yet only true love lasts forever |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
passion, the precurser, the rehearser, the every all of it, filling in enthrall of it ahhhh to hold the passion ever into hearts and soul's endeavor! is it a dream to think of such? i live on dreams and more and much...... is passion lost? in need of fleeting? no! it echoes whole, repeating!!!!! (great pome, Robert..... thank you for understanding my desire to tag on to it... you inspired me!!!!! passionately!!!) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done!  Passion is fleeting? LOL! Mine isn't, but I still LOVED this poem!  I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~ [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 11-22-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Robert - nicely done... BC |
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