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Love Within
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Love Within |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Love within " In darkened night My mind it drifts To a place That within you are I float Watching you sleeping Are you dreaming ? Maybe of me or someelse, other I endevour To kiss your soft pouted lips As you sleep Peaceful As closer I get A force pulling me from within Myself Me I wonder If thou does know How much I doth love you Do you feel the strength? Of love withholding my heart ~ ~ ~ For Dean |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey~ Nice to see you~ I'm sure he will enjoy this write~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maybe you are really inside his dreams, and not just floating above. Nice to meet you, Whiskey. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely ....  regards, sudhir |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Whiskey- Nicely penned thoughts. Enjoyed reading this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Beautifully done. I love the ending of course. I am many. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Nice to meet you Whiskey! I bet Dean will enjoy this just as much as we did! [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is the love that is. . . well done my friend. . .and welcome back. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Whiskey Very beautiful piece!I'm sure he will love it. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Beautifully put. I hope Dean knows how much love you give and feel. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, this is sooooooo beautiful! I know soon Dean will see how much he loves you and he will open his heart to you too! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great job, Whiskey... You certainly leave no doubt about your feelings for him...I know he will love it!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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