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Poetic Pause - Logan and Marge
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Poetic Pause - Logan and Marge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 In a place called Baton Rouge town many a thing could always go down You gotta watch when poets stray more happens than meets the light of day Come on down to Baton Rouge where the poets pause in pleasure Counting the moments found among the river of treasure There is a word going around about two poets that went on the town Now who that could be is not to be known but a lot of talking says it's set in stone Along the river banks they might be heard in *gentle sighs* Ahhhhh, my poet friends this is where the real beauty lies ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
mmmmmmm is there a mystery in the air? *giggling* I love the way this poem came together. BRAVO!!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge (and Logan), You're going to have to offer course on "how to present poems at PIPs" #101. I think I'd sign up. Never been there but you have sparked an interest with your cute poem.  [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice enjoyed reading much |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My goodness ... no mystery here~ Tee-Hee~ Thanks~  Larry~ Ahhhhh, the presentation is the easy part, it's the Poetic Pause that takes time~ Thank you~ Whiskey~ Thanks for dropping in for a read~ *Gentle Logan* Thank you for all you are~ all you were~ and all you are yet to be~ *LittleGoose* Hugs~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A charming read...thank you both! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge and Logan--You guys are too cute, and I just love you both! Everyone needs a poetic pause some time..thank you for this one. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) We all love you and Logan so very much; this poem expresses a beautiful friendship and joy! (smiles) I love it! I've always dreamed about going down to Louisiana, it seems like such an inspiration place. I dream of seeing the architecture there and walking among the French Quarters! (smiles) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Poetic Pause??? And you didn't take me along???  Did miss all the fun uhhh, while you two were stirring up the town Well I had some fun too, did mess up my computer at the office, took them two days to restore it  Did it all by myself Swell poem friends Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Lovely! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well...they always say trouble comes in twos  heheWHY DIDNT YOU TAKE ME.... I have a craving for Mardi-gras and cajun poets.. UMMM ERRR--I MEAN FOOD hahaha I could have went and seen SEN... the four of us could burn that state down me thinks. very cool dueting you two  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge...you just wait till I get my poetic paws on you!!!  |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Just beautiful Marge....lovely writing, I enjoyed it greatly!  *Krista Knutson* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
O yuh a collaboration seemlessly done |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Little Goose, I have to say we really had fun being this way of course if asked, hmm, and were we not? it is a puzzle of Gordian knot And always a very gentle smile and hugs to you |
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