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Open Poetry #17

The Way she Loved

Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-18 06:38 PM

The way she loved
Unspoken dream come true
Always in my heart
Passion flickering in smile

Drowning in her eyes
In seas of love
More delicate than rose
Yet full of strength

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-11-18 06:59 PM

yep---Mighty like a rose....and dang my memory but that was said about a jazz great---Charles Mingus maybe? Anyhoo...lovely write!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-11-18 07:42 PM

*sigh* romantic perfection. This is a poem to melt into a man's arms from. *sigh* magnificent, Sir Robert.

**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2001-11-18 07:45 PM

Yes a very beauiful way to remeber a lover.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-18 07:51 PM

Very romantic Sir Robert! Well done!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-11-18 08:11 PM

Robert...I see a tender memory beautifully portrayed...with just a hint of sensual fragrance.

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