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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-13 09:15 PM


Skipping too many stars
Long flight life trip
Bursting onto the scene
Fame gone in flash

Name living till forever
Prancing galaxy to galaxy
Searching for endless beginnings
Not one in sight

No not yet anyway
Next stop twinkling ahead
Time warped engines roaring
Cosmic dust trailing behind

That last blue planet
Curious lot were they
Barely breaking own atmosphere
Local moon major feat

Must leave before discovered
These creatures quite unstable
Young ones killing others
Older ones just watching



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1 posted 2001-11-13 09:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, I know just how you feel, and my heart cries outo to all the hurting and sorrow that fills our world! (sigh) I pray we can talk to our young ones and encourage them with pure love as our elderly can be loved and respected and share their love to their children! (sigh) I join you in your prayers, sweet friend! (big hugggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-13 10:11 PM


Sir Robert,
You caught me off guard with that one. Didn't see it coming. Painfully excellent point.  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-13-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-11-14 03:18 PM



Yes...you've an active mind, that you do.

More, please?

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4 posted 2001-11-15 09:13 AM


Yes, aliens might think exactly that if they only looked in isolated places.

A very narrow view but an imaginative one

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