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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-11-18 01:03 PM

Purpose of a breath that languished in time
falling on the ground that prospers
leaving your life as wicked it comes
desperate to see the next rainbow
Low trees angled in fate
that whisper your name so softly
heaven awakes with the starburst last twinkling
so your lips can cover my face

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

1 posted 2001-11-18 01:06 PM

Low trees angled in fate
That whisper your name so softly

I enjoyed the way you wrote this.
Peaches

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-11-18 01:12 PM

Purpose of a breath that languished in time
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Low trees angled in fate
that whisper your name so softly
heaven awakes with the starburst last twinkling
so your lips can cover my face
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Hey you

this is understatedly stunning Michael.
Beautiful!!
good to read you again dear poet of the wind.

I would wait till the end of time for you,
Then do it all again ... it's true.
I can't measure my love for you,
There's nothing to compare it to.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-18 01:41 PM

I can see those low angled cypress as they bend over the cliffs, kissed by morning mist with a whisper of love missed.
Very nice imagery.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-11-18 01:50 PM

As I got to the end of this poem the only thing I could do is *sigh* so tender.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2001-11-18 02:30 PM

Could this actaully be a happy one?

This is a beautiful soft piece, and flows so nicely.

Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

6 posted 2001-11-22 10:54 AM

It is so nice to see you posting......
I may not always understand everything you write but I always love it none the less...........

As Always
Jenn E

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