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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-17 10:00 PM


In the wrong town
Unchanging faces
With marmalade grins
No apple in eye

Skipping down crooked streets
Lost it
On a straight curve
Someone threw my way

Walking now
On paved black pain
Feeling the glare
From glass eyed houses

Hearing buzy body buzz
Above
Through wired branchless trees
No bark less bite

Cold white concrete paths
Useless grafitti
Scratched in its beginnings
Leading to stranger's doors

Rubber welcomes
Staring up at me
But first
Scuff those dirty soles

Must leave this place
Love locked up tight
Behind walls of fear
Trust here has disappeared

Path to new life
On straight road ahead
Leaving crooked ones behind
In the wrong town



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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1 posted 2001-11-17 10:07 PM


*sigh* I lived in a town like this once. I was ever the outsider looking in but not really wanting to be a part of their cold existance. Very well done, Sir Robert. **hugs** I hope you get to watch the glorious Metor shower tonight. Our skies are cloudy so I will miss it and I am heartbroken over it. I had visions of laying in a field watching this glorious spectacle of God's creation. *sigh*

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-11-17 10:12 PM


Skipping down crooked streets
Lost it
On a straight curve
Someone threw my way

Very cool write.  I've lived in a few wrong towns myself.

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