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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-11-13 07:53 PM


All around me it is dark
Yet one star is shining bright
The moon has hidden behind clouds
I'm standing in star's light

Million lightyears I have to travel
If I should want to see it closeby
But then reality might be disappointing
I'd rather dream and mystify

It is cold and I am shivering
Time to return to the warmth of stove
It's story will stay unrecovered
Cause…Hey, I'm not a philosophe



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-13-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-13 08:29 PM


No, you're one in a million!  

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-11-13 08:33 PM


Ah Titia...sometimes it is better to dream than to find out the reality.  This is very good...enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-11-13 08:47 PM




(smiles) You may be no philosopher, but you are something much more beautiful, a loving beautiful person with sweet dreams and hopes to foreve rshare! (smiles) We all love you for who you are, sweet Titia, you are so very special! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Logan
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4 posted 2001-11-13 08:55 PM


Geez, Titia, I am not either, but you are pretty dadgum good, I think..very gentle smile
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-11-13 09:06 PM


Oh,Titia~
I just LOVE this !  So beautifully said~
I love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Nan
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6 posted 2001-11-14 08:19 AM


Sounds pretty philosophical to me, m'friend...
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
7 posted 2001-11-14 09:05 AM


this is one amazing write, Titia, my friend...

Regards,
Sudhir

Duncan
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8 posted 2001-11-14 12:56 PM


Cute, Titia...got plenty of wood?
Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-11-14 02:14 PM


Kay, I'll share that million with you dear, thanks

Enchantress, HUGS to you too dear

Noah, your kiss just flew in, thanks

Logan, dadgum good??? Oh jee, I'm learning new words every day, thanks love

Marge, HUG HUG HUG to you sweety, glad you liked it

Nan, I did????

Sudhir, love to see you here more often

Duncan, applying for a sawjob?? Then get your but(bud??) overhere, we've stacks twice your size  

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
10 posted 2001-11-15 12:19 PM



Titia-
   Wonderful...just wonderful...and so are you!
   Beautifully penned, sweet friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
11 posted 2001-11-15 03:48 PM


Hey my tricky Vicky, long time not seen.
How are you sweet girl?
Thanks for your kind reply.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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