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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-12-22 09:00 PM



Satin Gown

Jewels of blue enhance her eye
Golden hair reflects the sky
Rouge of pink on silken face
Satin gown of flowing lace

Crimson red to wet her lips
Pearly glaze on fingertips
Finally, to complete the whole
Poetry adorns her soul

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (12-22-2001 09:01 PM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-22 09:02 PM


so. . .this is how you look. . .

a dress of the finest words. . . wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2001-12-22 09:17 PM


The most important part is of course - Poetry adorns her soul.  So enjoyable and well worded.  Roger  


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3 posted 2001-12-22 11:01 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you truly do wear this gown, for your inspirations and words are priceless gems! (kiss on cheek) You are a true queen of words, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-22 11:29 PM


Elizabeth,
It doesn't get much better than that. Love Sy

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5 posted 2001-12-23 07:53 AM


Elizabeth,
your write left me bejewelled in wonder.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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6 posted 2001-12-24 01:42 AM


But, but...you forgot the great big, fuzzy blue cookie monster slippers!

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2001-12-24 01:45 AM


I'm sure I ould have included Mysterias entire wardobe in this poem, but I was trying o keep it short
Thanks all for your kind comments
Liz

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8 posted 2001-12-24 02:49 AM


beautiful writing, Liz... absolutely beautiful.......

merry christmas, my friend!

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9 posted 2001-12-24 11:28 AM



I just found my Christmas Present.  
Right here.  
She's beautiful.  
And she shares very well...

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