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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-12-20 08:43 PM



This is defenitely not my day
As I will be so honest to say
First I didn't understand Marge's rhyme
But the 'Halo'problem is solved by her in time
Then I searched for a challenge of Poet deVine
At last she had to send me the URL and she did fine
My eyes never stopped at the Challengeforum you know
Oh my Oh my that's another one I frequently must go
I wrote a poem to her challenge and posted it along
But clicked on 'new topic' instead of 'reply', so wrong
Well I finally figured it all out in my head
This lady should have long time ago gone to bed
I'll see you tomorrow or whatever the day might be
For I won't go to work till january 2nd you see
So before I'm messing up this entire site too
I'll say Good Night and Happy Dreams to you

LOL Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

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1 posted 2001-12-20 08:53 PM


Titia~
You little doll you~
You delight us so ...
get a good night's rest and return on the rise of sun~
For a poet friend like you - should never come un-done~

Love ya', gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tracey
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2 posted 2001-12-20 09:00 PM


Oh dear Titia. It must be very late for you. What a day you have had. I hope you have pleasant dreams and wake up refreshed to tackle all the new challenges tomorrow will bring. As my grandfather used to say, “night, night, sleep tight, don’t let the bed bugs bite”.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-12-20 09:53 PM


Having one of those days, huh?  Yep, best to go to bed then before you do some real damage!  Good one, Titia.
SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-12-21 08:25 PM


Sweet dreams, Tita. And, MERRY CHRISTMAS!
Balladeer
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5 posted 2001-12-21 08:27 PM


We all have those daze, Titia! Sleep well...
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-12-21 08:28 PM


Titia - have had many of these type of days also... Merry Christmas to you and yours...

BC

Startime
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7 posted 2001-12-21 08:41 PM


It's nice to know you will get to have a break...I know those kind of days very well. Merry Christmas....**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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8 posted 2001-12-21 08:52 PM


Oh titia I've had those kinds of days too. Nice write.Merry Christmas to you. strbbux
thepoeticplumber
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9 posted 2001-12-21 10:31 PM


Very explicit and understandable writing.  Great use of rhyming too.  I so much enjoyed reading this.  What a great piece of diary.  Roger


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