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Dancing on the Ocean
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Dancing on the Ocean |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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The sky was Brilliant that night Diamonds shinning And falling Gently as the Moon witnessed I need release I stand there again Among the nature Of all time letting The air breathe my Skin, feeling peace I felt your eyes, Saw your touch on My skin, kissed Away all my fears Whispering In silent tones Of undying love I hear your Voice inside me now In my strength Of life, rain sometimes falls Soaking deep in my soul Our dance floor is empty The pain of memories Have slipped away Though they are never strong Enough to say goodbye One last dance One last love One last night Dancing on the ocean with you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My Heart Always Let the moon witness And the oceans Remain clam For I find peace in The memory of you 1992 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
greeneyes, this is so moving and so melancholy, you express it all so well in delicate images  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As soon as I saw your name pop up I knew it was going to be a beautiful piece...AND it is!! Thank you for yet another treasure. Just love the way you write Lauren! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely heartfelt tribute, Lauren. Full of love and sweet remembrance. All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sky was Brilliant that night Diamonds shinning And falling Gently as the Moon witnessed I need release I stand there again Among the nature Of all time letting The air breathe my Skin, feeling peace I felt your eyes, Saw your touch on My skin, kissed Away all my fears Whispering In silent tones Of undying love ================================== If I just deeply sigh...will you know how this beautiful expression whispers across my heart? yes...you WILL know   *SIGH*  Ice covers my soul |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Always keep the memories alive! what a heartfelt tribute. May God bless you always! love, RP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
always remembering. . . wonderful Lauren. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, This is a very tender peace. The ocean does offer peace, but it's only a helpmate, for true peace can only come from within. Your imagery in this is stunning, my friend. Big (((((hugs))))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I felt your eyes ... I hear your voice ... ... soaking deep in my soul ... Magnificent!! That was no ramble of the mind, but true words of a great heart. <<<< sigh >>>> |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, What a lovely way to be remembered. Very touching. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Chelsea~ thank you for your words, they mean a lot to me... ~~ Nancy~ Thank you for always coming by to read, and for leaving your heartfelt comments upon these pages...you are appreciated... ~~ Lone Wolf~ I appreciate you telling me you were here, and enjoyed....thank you much... ~~ Janet Marie~ you have that special way about you....I know...thank you for your Grace...always...  ~~ RosePetal~ always alive in my heart and mind, thank you.... ~~ Sven~ my friend, its hard to forget, thank you always my friend... ~~ Auguste~ yes it does offer peace, and where I find most of mine...thank you my friend... ~~ ctowen~ your comments are more then kind, and one I take to heart, thank you.... ~~ Larry C~ thank you for letting this touch...I appreciate your words... ~~ Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God bless you...Happy Thanksgiving, Lauren...  Just...Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* Beautifully done!! Charisma ~TMP~ |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
this is a very touching poem, truly enjoyed. I really love the pic Irish Rose has posted, very apt to this poem ~ cottage |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunningly romantic. I absolutely lost myself in this beautiful poem. I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
Time and memories are kind, bittersweet and beautifully written! PL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lauren, this is a beautiful memory you have shared. "I need release I stand there again Among the nature Of all time letting The air breathe my Skin, feeling peace" This is pure poetic imagery. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This is a beautiful poem. Keep all the memories alive in your heart. Happy Thanksgiving! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Such beautiful expression in your poem Greeneyes... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This whispers of your love Lauren, in the most stirring ways. Your heart dear friend, always lovely...... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts and feelings...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Irish Rose~ you have enriched my words with your picture, thank you its lovely as are your comments.... ~~ Charisma~ thank you for peeking in, I appreciate the comments ~~ cottage~ thanks for your thoughtful words.... ~~ PoeticLicense~ time can be bittersweet as well....thanks for sharing your thoughts with me... ~~ Midnitesun~ I am humbled by your words, thank you... ~~ Domzi~ I keep all my memories there....thank you, and Happy Thanksgiving to you as well...Peace... ~~ CocoBaci~ I appreciate you stopping by to read, thank you for leaving your words... ~~ Gentle Spirit~ thank you for being who you are.... ~~ JamesMichael~ thank you for your thoughts....I appreciate them... ~~ Love and peace to all.... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-21-2001).] |
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