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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-17 12:22 PM



I just want
to kiss you
before I go
to sleep
this tender type
of touching
goes deeper
than other things reach

so when I close
my eyes
a part of you
I wear
awake and in
my dreams
I carry you
to each


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-17 12:43 PM


Filled with sensual passion. I love the way you write. There is such love in your words somehow filled with longing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-17 12:56 PM


yes, very soft, Helen, very passionate!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-12-17 12:58 PM




Such a tender romantic piece with a feeling of longing.....

Wonderful....

Thank you
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-12-17 01:13 PM


How utterly romantic, beautiful, and 1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2001-12-17 05:57 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful and sensual, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) May he forever touch your heart with true love and fill your dreams with eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2001-12-17 09:22 PM


Lovely..and a feeling I know well.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-12-17 10:43 PM


A short and very sweet poem Helen!  I know how it feels, you can't wait to wake up to them in the morning.  You just want to be with the one you love forever, may your wishes come true sweet Helen.

      Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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