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Where I Would Lie
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Where I Would Lie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where I Would Lie I’d vie the corner of your eye Beneath your gentle breathe of sigh And offer you, bouquets of word Full of praise and sweet absurd I’d ring your head with rainbow hue Paint each day your wings anew And brew you nectar from my mind With all the sweet that I could find I’d toll you rings in flowing chime In colored phrase that rope in rhyme And call to you, to come and sit And sip the nectar of my wit. I’d fly with you the skies of blue Into a fantasy come true. And ring you with forever’s band Of flowers set in timeless sand Come near and be my butterfly And hover me, where I would lie. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm there..   |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You have become the perfect bearer of flowers... for any butterfly regards to you, my friend, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, It is only fair to say you are the butterfly that brought me here and I do lay beneath the corner of your eye. *L* Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Your words get more extraordinary every time I read them. This is a perfect love poem Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Thank you, only a perfect poem would suit a perfect love. *L* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's chocolate chips and fingertips jello-smooth in rainbow hue a bit of Sy with by and by my start of day my gild of gay At least, that's how Sun sees it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Your fan gives me a wonderful tan. *L* |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You are the most wonderful flower for the butterfly.your words are always touching my heart.Nicely done. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a romantic soul you have. I am sure your lady love must melt with soft delight when you read your words of eternal love to her. Wonderful writing. Of course....I LOVE IT!!! **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’d vie the corner of your eye Beneath your gentle breathe of sigh ======================================== I’d ring your head with rainbow hue Paint each day your wings anew ====================================== I’d toll you rings in flowing chime In colored phrase that rope in rhyme ===================================== I’d fly with you the skies of blue Into a fantasy come true. And ring you with forever’s band Of flowers set in timeless sand Come near and be my butterfly And hover me, where I would lie. ==================================== Good grief Stinky...again I say have mercy!! You make it real hard to pick fave lines... jeepers creepers ya make it hard to do anything but sigh  With word bouquets like this were gonna call you the Poetry Florist. *L* This is so lovely Sy...the imagery and the intend. That closing couplet has me picturing Randy laying in a field of daisies plucking petals while a butterfly lands on his nose (teehee) Me thinks where ever you might lie ...along would come the butterflies. *winkiewinkie* me |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Seymour, this makes me want to flutter! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I enjoyed your rhyme, especially this... "I’d toll you rings in flowing chime In colored phrase that rope in rhyme" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, They are meant for all that love. *L* JM, No quarters, no mercy, wait till tomorrow. WW R S Opeth, You picked the best, thank you. Irish, Then fly like a butterfly. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, the butterfly of your heart sings with such beauty in your lovely words! (sigh) May the love of your life forever bring sunshine to the garden in your heart! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is such a wonderful love poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
How glad I am that I happened into your forum. How absolutely enchanting this is. Best |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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