»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #17
»
{{{ On The Sand }}}
| Open Poetry #17 |
|
{{{ On The Sand }}} |
|
|
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 {{{ On the Sand }}} Draw your love on the sand And soon it would fade away Draw it on the stone And forever it would stay To tell of how it came your way How it drew your breath, Your life And gave you the power to say Words You never thought you’d utter them beyond the fences of your bay Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
||
| © Copyright 2001 MyEnchanted_Melody - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...when it's drawn in the heart -- THEN, it is permanent, for even stones can roll away. May such art find us all and remain ours to share and enjoy.  -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
So very romantic. You have captured the feeling perfectly and left me in awe at its beauty.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Loved the picture of two hearts in the sand. And the poem spoke so well of a love that endures and is always there. |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful! Lovely and very romantic. Enjoyed, thank you for this one. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, Melody. I have a habit of drawing hearts and other love symbols in the sand, to watch the tides take it out to sea. This is wonderful. Sandra |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've walked that beach my friend. . . well done. . . soft and touching. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Mark~ Yes....it is permanent when it is drwn in the heart...if that heart is permanent.  Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Startime~ Thank you for your kind sweet words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Magnus~ I'm glad that you liked it... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Nancy~ Thank You for such sweet words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sandra~ Thank you dear friend. I have drawn hearts and words lately on the sand too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sven~ I wonder how many have walked that beach.... Have you enjoyed your walk there? Thank you dear friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ This is soooooooooooooo pretty~ Lovely thoughts drawn through your poetry~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
MyEnchanted_Melody- I'm liking this one LOTS. Such lovely thoughts expressed here. Wonderfully penned, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-14-2001).] |
||
|
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Marge~ Dearest...Thank you sooooooo much for your valuable advice. And thank you soooooooooooooo much again for your sweet kind words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Vicky~ I am glad that you liked it. Thank you dearly for your kind words. Love ...& hugs... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
