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arthur
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0 posted 2001-12-15 04:28 PM



An echo of her voice I trace
I can hear her fading tread
I can only just recall her face
Because she's dead, dead , dead

arthur



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1 posted 2001-12-15 05:14 PM


Michael, I know how difficult it is to try and recall a loved ones face after they have passed on.  Then all at once it comes to you..sometimes in a dream, sometimes in a memory. Difficult write. I hope you are well.  Hugs across the pond.  Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-12-15 05:15 PM


Arthur...this is sad, short and so well
said....Sorry you are experiencing these
feelings...I know how they feel...

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3 posted 2001-12-15 05:21 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Arthur, this is sooooooo heartbreaking! My heart cries out to you, for I know how heartwrenching it feels to try to remember a loved ones face when one has passed on! (wipes tears) Our hearts are always with you, dearest friend, we all love you so very much! (big huggsssss) So sad but well-written! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-15 05:34 PM


mmmm not dead I hope...just missing an email addy maybe and waiting for one that works. Memories never are dead, my friend. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-15 05:43 PM


so sad!!!!!!
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