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Rogue24
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0 posted 2001-12-12 07:50 PM


Rebirth

Another year ending
The memories gently tucked away
A time for reflection
The pain of a loss
A time to release
Souls touched
By events of time
Forever embedded
Like prints in the sand.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

A new year beginning
New memories made
A rejeuvination of the soul
The world unfolding life anew
The joy of rebirth
A hope for days
Filled with laughter
Few tears
A promise of  tomorrow
A continuance of life.

T W. Rose
@}-;---




Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

© Copyright 2001 T.W. Rose - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2001-12-12 08:00 PM


Thank you so much for this wonderfully  rejuvenating poem. It's "feel good" poetry.
vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-12-12 08:01 PM



Rogue24-
   Love the hope for a bright tomorrow
   that you've penned here.
   Nicely done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Rogue24
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3 posted 2001-12-12 08:14 PM


midnitesun:thank you   I am glad it made you smile.

vlraynes:thank you vicky,hope and faith seem to play a major part in my life lately.  

HUGS.
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-12-12 11:33 PM


Yes, this speaks to me right now. I'm not sorry to see this year go...but I'm looking forward to next year, for I have great plans, great freedom...and life is good again!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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5 posted 2001-12-13 07:37 AM


Terry,

     Inspirational to say the least.  This past year has been been quite a year for me.  Alot has happened. *sighs* See now ya have me thinking back and remembering all kinds of things *chuckles* I enjoyed this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Rogue24
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6 posted 2001-12-13 07:47 AM


Tracey: I cant say I am not happy to see this year end either!   Onto a brighter year, with many new challenges, BRING IT ON!!!!  

Tara: I am glad I got you thinking about the past year, good time to reflect on things, makes you realize your priorities! HUGS LOVE YOU!  
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Son Netier
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7 posted 2001-12-13 08:23 AM


I agree, this is Feel Good poetry, I’ve walked the sand many times, and turned to watch the Ocean wash away the footprints ready for a new set

Bill

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8 posted 2001-12-13 08:51 AM




BRAVO!!! Yes, may all our spirits soar to the name of Love and rejuvenate and reach for hopes of harmonious tomorrows and love! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet T.W, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rogue24
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9 posted 2001-12-13 09:45 AM


Son: Not very often do I find myself writing feel good poetry, it's only been lately that I have come to test my wits with it. I must say the smiles are more welcome than tears lately.  

Noah: Thank you very much, what can I say, you are always so kind, caring, thank you.
Hugs.
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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