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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-16 04:29 AM


Her Reply

It was your
sweet tender lips
that drew me to you.

Until I soon discovered
that I needed a little more
and nothing less would do.

Until I realized
that I would never be satisfied
until I looked you in the eyes
and ask you to be mine
until the end of time.

Did you look
her in the eye?

"Yes."

And did you ask her
to be yours until
the end of time?

"Yes."

And what was
her reply?

"Yes of course."

JamesLee
November11,2001
JinILoveYou

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-11-16 09:45 AM


James, I am so happy for you!    

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2 posted 2001-11-16 09:52 AM


Oh YAY, that is awesome James. I don't know if it happened, or this is your hoped for scenario, but either way, its so happy. So if it's true CONGRATULATIONS
Sandra

peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-11-16 11:42 AM


Oh yes James,I'm happy for you.
Peaches

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-16 06:38 PM


BRAVO!!!!OH GOSH THIS POEM HAS ME VERY HAPPY FOR BOTH OF YOU!!! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL. WAY TO GO, JAMES.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-16 08:10 PM


James!  Is this true?   Will wedding bells soon ring?   Oh please let us know!!  
If this is true then CONGRATULATIONS
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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6 posted 2001-11-16 09:16 PM


If it's real...congratulations! If it's fantasy...BIGGER congratulations!!  
Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-11-16 09:22 PM


Simple, honest feelings.  The best, James!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-11-17 03:39 AM


Thank you Sea, Sandra, Peaches, Startime, Nancy, Ballader and Lone Wolf...
I have been through so many disappointments that I'm not sure if this is real or imagined...I know most of it is real but only God knows the hearts...anyway I intend to find out what the future holds and time will indeed tell the story...James

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