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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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I followed you like a puppy lost It was like I was an employee and you the boss Waiting on you, keeping you served Begrudging me of the of love that I deserved Soon as I get ahead, you slow me down with bumps Every smooth moment overturned with lumps It was a hard job keeping you satisfied With no love from you, I often cried Fed up with keeping you pleased Never once did you catch me, when I feel to my knees I was like your waitress daily in various uniforms No longer do I need you body heat to stay warm You are frosty as the arctic inside In my heart, there's no room for you to reside I'm not taking orders anymore Case closed, relationship over Both my feet are out the door My love is removed from your menu Taking it elsewhere away from your venue |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Joanna, I'm so so sorry it didn't work out well before for you! (kiss on lips) We all love you so much, and I love you so very much and I know deep down you'll find the most beautiful love to cherish eternally, to make your heart sing eternally! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on lips) You have suhc a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Good for you...no one should be a waitress to the one they love....it should be mutual sharing and caring about each others needs. I am glad you have found someone more worthy of the precious love you have to give. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
Congratulations on writing a beautiful poem and standing up for yourself.^_^ -Derek |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - oh how you speak the truth. Sounds like someone I'm intimately familiar with. At times it does seem to be one sided, even though it takes two... BC |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, Good for you for moving on  You deserve much better than that And with such a sweet soul as Noah I'm sure you'll find it Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Congrats for standing up for yourself.No one should be a waitress to anyone. Peaches |
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