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wornways
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0 posted 2001-12-09 02:09 AM


ripples

nothing can erase
the person we come to be
though our time here ends
for when our memory fades
ever our ripples expand

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1 posted 2001-12-09 08:07 AM



Ripples...the circles of life....

Thank you!

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2 posted 2001-12-09 12:03 PM


I like the ripples concept....it's how I explain things to my kids   It just makes a clearer picture for them   nicely done  
The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-12-09 09:16 PM


The thoughts of our lives rippling through time after we are gone is a good theme....I will ponder this for a while.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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