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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-12-07 10:35 PM


Upon my life, a broken soul
something missing torn from whole
of missteps, we often speak
never realizing our path is weak
those not driven, by a strong mind
will find this jagged world unkind
hearts are for those, living inside
unlike most people who have already died

"it was me not you"

© Copyright 2001 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-07 10:47 PM


*sigh* such an outpouring of feeling from deep within. Filled with such basic truths. I really like your writing. You have heart, soul and mind in such few words that I am left feeling I have read something that touched my soul. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-07 10:49 PM




(sigh) So very sad but true; it takes  a strong heart and strong mind to stand still in this world and find the love and joy to bring to others, or we can find our paths weak! (sigh) My heart goes out to all and pray that He can give us all the strength to carry on with a smile of hope! (sigh) Soooooo emotionally powerful, sweet James! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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