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First Love, First Kiss.....Marge's Challenge
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First Love, First Kiss.....Marge's Challenge |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Feeling frozen after this Intriguing interlude with a Runaway romantic, I had a Sentimental seizure, a Typical tearjerker…. Love-lorn lunatic that I was and, an Outwitted oddity, I became… Vacillating in a vicious vacuum Eternally evading my very existence…. Feeling foolish about all this, Introspection I invoked… Revisiting..…retracing…., a Sure-footed surrender I made, and, Truly tranquilized is how I felt.. Kindly knowledge kicked-in.. Imploring incessantly that Strong Self- worth is what Symbolizes Success!!!!  [This message has been edited by amigo (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okay! I love this, and why it is so far down the page with no replies could only be because the brilliance of it has blinded everyone here! LOL! This is a challenge well met if you ask me! To the top with you. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I totally agree with Temptress and am glad she found it and brought it back up. It is a wonderful read......I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! I am so happy Jennifer found this timeless classic so I can read your beautiful lovely words! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet amigo, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Temptress - Thank you soooo much...i really started to feel there was something wrong, a major mistake, that no one felt like sharing their views/ suggestions....i truly appreciate what you've done, & ofcourse, your sweet way of expression...i'm pleased that you liked it...thanks again..  Startime - thank you...i'm glad to know that you loved it..  Noah Eaton - your words are so beautiful and you're a kind hearted & sweet friend...thank you dear for sending love from all of you this way...  luv & hugs, amigo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ This is just a wonderfully creative acrostic~ How wonderfully you have met the 'inspired' challenges~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
 Marge - thank you for your great inspiration and your loving & encouraging words... luv & hugs, amigo |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow you've done good  challenge excellently met! |
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