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When Sunlight Falls.......(Marge's Challenge)
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When Sunlight Falls.......(Marge's Challenge) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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When Sunlight Falls Today I spend some hours In hush of golden sunbeams Were thoughts escape from reality To slide away in daydreams It's then when Sunlight falls To caress my sensitive soul Were it gently rocks the inner me To cherish and console 'Twill spread His warm comfort All over my longing whole Were it will be absorbed greedily By desert of my empty soul Light of love and sanity wellness of soothing harmony In Thee I find strength Solace for struggling me Today I spend some hours Encircled with Golden Rays Peaceable Light please guide me home Relieve my blue whiny days. Charisma ~*TMP*~ ~*Theresia~* |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this was very nice. Sunlight can tend to have that effect on me as well.. but only during the late morning to early afternoon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, A very good write and I enjoyed the read. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A beautiful touch you placed on these words, dear lady...I like it very much.  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW Charisma, I don't think I've ever read a 'long' poem by your hand. It's beautiful, really is Enjoyed reading very much HUGS Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma, this is very touching, very gentle and soothing, thank you so much for taking up the challenge! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) I love it!!! He will always breathe His light upon us all and have us glowing in His warmth and comfort. (smiles) That is when the sunlight falls! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet Charisma! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
EagleScorpio: thank you for your kind comment, it is always great to know that so many people share the same feelings. Seymour: thank you my dear friend, glad you enjoyed the read. Balladeer: it is always a pleasure to read your comments, and they are ver much appreciated by me Dear Poet. Titia: thank you for the *WOW*, glad you are finally able to read a "long" poem from my hand...I wrote many "long poems" and you can find most of them at my homepage dear friend. Sunshine: Thank you Karilea, and it was a pleasure to write something for the challenge. to do that was already an award for me. Noah: thank you for your always lovely responses, it it sooooo good to have them, and to know that you like it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma,dearest friend~ This is just so very, very lovely~ I thank you for such beauty to start my day~ Blessings to you for this holiday season~ GORGEOUS~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I was gently rocked last night..it felt wonderful for a change..I loved this one Charisma..your name fits you...*s hugsss Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: thank you dear friend, so glad that you liked this one Maureen: thank you for your kind words |
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