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I Heard The Night Say Foreverly
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I Heard The Night Say Foreverly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Heard The Night Say Foreverly ~*Marge Tindal*~  The day quickly curtsied in magenta corners quilting my heart with starlight twinkling cascading around me in ebony whispers Until you, I never had an inkling that the night could speak so cleverly Yet as surely as I breathe, ... I know I heard the night say foreverly ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sure you didn't hear the Everly Brothers...? Lovely! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
mmmmmmmm just love this Marge  very soft and so lovely |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so soft.......so loving.......beautiful Margie girl.....beautiful.... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Foreverly sounds beautiful to me!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Lovely! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sweet Marge, I do love your short verses very, very much. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Until you, I never had an inkling that the night could speak so cleverly Yet as surely as I breathe, ... I know I heard the night say foreverly ================================== Im thinkin the night STOLE that line from YOU  LOVE this you clever poetess of words and romantic phrases.... your muse is sighing soooo sweetly... and we partake in the pleasures *teehee*  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH gee...Marge this is fantastic with the words you associated with the sinking of the sun, the stars and the night sky... foreverly it certainly is....Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So soft, gentle and lyricial! Love it Marge! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely heavenly. Such a beautiful vision you weave in your words. I love it.Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Could be ... someone sang sweet harmony~ Thank you sweet friend~ SEA~ Thank you so much gal~ GentleSpirit~ Thanks for your comments, sweet lady~ Elizabeth~ Awwwww, again I thank you for reading me and letting me know you enjoyed it~ Denise~ Thank you my dear friend~ Titia~ Thankee, doll~ JanetMarie~ Aw shucks .. just one of those $1.98 words that the muses find when all that's been written before just won't say what the heart feels~ *Hugs*, gal~ Magnus~ I always appreciate your kind replies. Thank you~ Enchantress~ Hugs right back at you, poetess~ StarTime~ Awww, the night whispers such lovely thoughts for us to grab and put to paper~ We've just got to listen ... Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Foreverly, Goose?, ahh, of course there is always forever to those who know, of which you certainly are one...very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Sooooooo angelic and gorgeous this breathtakingly beautiful poem is! (smiles) You always paint the most magnificient visions and images in your lovely words! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Until you, I never had an inkling that the night could speak so cleverly" this pulled out so many emotions, thank you....I love this...  Lauren~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-13-2001).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Foreverly - What a wonderful dream...I enjoyed, m'friend.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Yes .... foreverly Noah~ Thank you~ GreenEyes~ Thank you so very, very much~ Nan~ I'm glad to share with you, sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- OH...'foreverly'...that likes me a LOT. My heart is smiling right along with yours, sweet buddy of mine. Love you bunches  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ It means the world to me to share this *BIG LIKE* with you~ Thank you, my friend~ Always~ or perhaps I should say foreverly *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I love your description of the sunset, I don't have to look outside, just read your words You always know how to touch the hearts of so many with just a few simple words. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Such gental beauty in this wondrous piece, you are truly a wonderful writer dear friend and I have missed you, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sisterofmyheart...how did I miss this? Oh, I know, I was becoming a grandmother...while you were just flyingly, likingly, loverly...being happily foreverly! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Thank you so much for the lovely thoughts~ Cerenity~ It's so good to see you~ I'll keep tugging you back to the circle~  For I miss you too~ Martie~ Well ... look at you, sweet sis~ Grandma looks good on you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
I could hardly get past the first line "The day quickly curtsied in magenta corners", it blew me away so much. Absolutely gorgeous!!!! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rebekah~ Thank you so very much. That's such a lovely thing to say~ Welcome to Passions .. I'm off to search for your posts~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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