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Carol Lina
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 94
USA

0 posted 2001-12-05 07:18 PM

Mama, I'm hoping you'll hear me
because I am praying tonight.
There’s a friend who needs lovin’ you see
she’s afraid and she’s lost in the night.

Yes, I know I said I would be silent.
But Mama, this voice you can feel.
Every time I came to you for answers
there was something so loving, so real.

Can you reach down with those angel wings?
Just to sing her a sweet lullaby?
Let her hear how the heavens can sing?
Please, she needs you tonight, so do I.

Carolina

[This message has been edited by Carol Lina (edited 12-05-2001).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-12-05 07:25 PM

Listen carefully to the wind in the trees,
and watch that twinkling starlight. The one you need is there.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-05 07:28 PM

Tears flowed as I read this poem. Such a beautiful heartfelt prayer. Thank you for the precious gift of your sharing it with me. **Hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

3 posted 2001-12-05 07:31 PM

A tear jerker,beautifully written!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-12-05 09:34 PM

words are always heard. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-12-05 09:37 PM

Extremely touching, poet

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-12-05 09:46 PM

As soft as a mother's caress.
Well done poetess.
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-12-05 10:24 PM

This is so touching. I am sure she will hear you.

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

8 posted 2001-12-05 11:07 PM

A tender longing touches the heart deep..may you hear the sweet singing tonight

VR

LadySofia
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

9 posted 2001-12-06 01:34 AM

I am speechless. That was absolutely beautiful. *sniffles*

^_^ LadySofia

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

10 posted 2001-12-06 01:35 AM

Awww, well this was awfully sad

Beautiful tho...beautiful

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

11 posted 2001-12-06 01:56 AM

As she looks down from above
I know she hears what you think of
Shes there with all of her love
Giving you peace from up above
Singing you a lullaby
comforting you on this night
Her hand will guide you through the way
And no longer lost is where you'll stay
For her love shines ever so true
And anytime you need her you know what to do
Just say that prayer and close your eyes
She'll open her wings as she transcends from the skies

I loved this.Glad to know there are wonderful mothers out there that love their children endlessly.
Peachces

Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

12 posted 2001-12-06 03:16 PM

(I had major computer problems here and had to rejoin, so sorry about that)

Thank you all for your wonderful responses, I really appreciate them so very much.
You're all wonderful.

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