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Feather Quill
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Feather Quill I see it Floating there My feather quill White perfect gift Of unknown gull Sent to remind Of long lost skill Off it floats An unmanned hull Adrift, adrift in Lack of will Joe Lamando |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Joe...and so the old ways are lost...just an errant breeze blows them into antiquity. Your poem is layered with meaning. I really do like the way you write, you know? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wrote of a feathered quill once, I think I shall go find it, just to get your opinion in a critique... for this....likes me very much! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joe, your writing has a certain magical quality to it....just love it! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
This I like a lot......  thanks for sharing Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You quill your thoughts well. I enjoyed the many layers to this gentle feathery piece.  |
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