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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-12-03 05:20 AM



Rolling
Carting it all,
Slow going place to place
All her time left in bags half full,
Just things.

Pushing
Ignored by all
Turns away face to face
Quiet but words by the bag full,
To sing.

Singing
Songs known by all,
Blessing with simple grace
Sung with a heart never too full,
Going.

Gloom


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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-12-03 08:39 AM


and there is a simple charm
a hum she does now sing--alarmed
that should she shine some light on her?
She would, she should, she'd be--sunburnt...

smiles, PG....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-12-03 09:11 AM


Prof,
I'd say about three bags full. LOL Enjoyed *L*

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
3 posted 2001-12-03 09:58 AM


I enjoyed this very much.
Peaches

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