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When God Gets Done With Me (Another Marge Challenge Phrase)
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When God Gets Done With Me (Another Marge Challenge Phrase) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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When God gets done with me, I will then be free released to heaven's grip to firmly happily be. When God is finished with me He'll take my tired will soften it with the glow of His hands my troubles stirred will still. When God breaks through distant sky I'll, in awe, stare back no tears to take to the everlasting no heartbreak left when gates are nigh. When God see's fit to bring me home I'll dance in joy to go along those clouds or wherever it is when heaven's palms, with love overflow. When sentimental shadows make me smile and earth no longer binds my stay I'll be making distant trip to gentle gold paved way. When God gets done with me I'll will walk the miles in gentle treasures left behind these words will make you smile. When first the clouds accept me in I'll smile down in hopes you'll come so hasten, friend, to love God has just think of where you're going compared to where you're coming from. When God gets done with me just let me be remembered poetry was my soul in ink my talent, no truer treasure. When God gets done with me my friend smile on, for I will be well settled on the breath of angels riding on God's love swell. When God gets done with me my words, only then, will cease but reach for me in volumes let my books by hours' use, be creased. When I am gone just like that vapor of air He says we are just think on me and smile, my love for I will have no scars. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
What a beautiful write.. heavenly.. angelic.. Hope it is a long time before he's done with you. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
"When God gets done with me just let me be remembered poetry was my soul in ink my talent, no truer treasure." --------------- And a treasure this is. I enjoyed this one. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Jenn. Enjoyed this one! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! WOW!!! You always express yourself so well! Yes, your love and words will always rest in your loving spirit, and until that day, your loving heart will always sing with such wonderful love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend, I love this challenge! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was very well written, Jenn. He seems to know how to heal all. The depth of His love never ceases to amaze me. Enjoyed this one. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne~ This is quite beautifully done~ Thank you soooooo much for sharing your inspire~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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