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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MISTY MORNING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I lay down my head, and try to sleep, but my eyes tear, all they do is weep… They do not close, I know not why, all they can do, is want to cry… Why does the rain, fall from my eyes, instead of coming down, out of the skies… It flows down my face, in a sheet, and a puddle forms, at my feet… I watch, as it flows away from me, all of my hopes, dreams they be… Today is the same, sadder than most, my thoughts aren’t free, just like a ghost… I feel things inside, from the pain within, the hurt so unbearable, it should be a sin… Morning comes quickly, it’s misty like me, and I wonder what comes next, what will be… ~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such sadness fills these words. I hope that sunshine will shine warmth and love into your heart and life and rid you of your Misty Mornings. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Bill...such a sad write! BIG (((Hugs))) to you my friend! ~Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and your sorrow! (sad sigh) My heart is always with you, sweet friend, know that you are always loved by many such as me! (sad sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  Maylove and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I hope what comes next will be a brighter day, Bill. Very nice read. ((Hugs)) to you. |
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Ocean Beauty Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 18VT, USA |
I wish there was some way I could help you feel better. Just remember that no matter how dark the night may become, the sun will always rise in the morning. ~Dawn~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I immediately thought of an old song by Dean Martin..."in the misty moonlight" completely opposite of your title, and your words hold a longing. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What will be... will be...  Your words sing a lovely sad song Make this a good day, m'friend - Enjoy the beauty of the world about you..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, This is an excellent write, a keeper. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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