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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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0 posted 2001-12-01 06:00 PM


Mr. Sandman, Mr. Sandman,
help me slumber through the night.
Sprinkle stardust all around
in the misty gray twilight.

Dream Weaver, Dream Weaver,
won’t you weave me a dream?
Something very special
but with a pleasant theme.

Fortune Teller, Fortune Teller,
look into your crystal ball.
Do you think you can tell me
just when he is going to call.

Mr. DJ, Mr. DJ
won’t you play for me a tune.
Take me back to yesterday,
to the days we left too soon.

Master Artist, Master Artist
can you paint me a masterpiece.
As you splash paint on the canvas
Your inner feelings you release.

Mr. Wizard of all wizards
take me to your fantasyland.
It puts a smile upon my face
this is a place I understand.        

© Copyright 2001 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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Canada
1 posted 2001-12-01 06:49 PM


Now I can fully relate to all these requests...I would ask the very same things....
Hey...maybe for Christmas...Do you think Santa would grant our requests?
**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-12-01 07:02 PM


Well done!  Enjoyed!  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Eloise
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Wyoming
3 posted 2001-12-01 07:54 PM


Only if we've been good, Karen  

Thanks Nancy, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2001-12-01 10:34 PM


  Very well done Eloise! And when you are done, can you send that Sandman to me?
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-12-01 10:41 PM




(smiles) May all these sweet dreams come true for you this holiday season! (smiles) I have faith and love in you they all will! (kiss on cheek) Have the sweetest dreams, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eloise, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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6 posted 2001-12-01 10:44 PM


I am in need of sleep and pleasant dreams!
I liked this very much!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-12-02 11:54 AM


Eloise~
THANK YOU~
This is just wonderful 'inspire' of thought~
*grinning* .... MORE ???
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
8 posted 2001-12-03 03:41 PM


Eloise,
well done! Challenge met.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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