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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-01 12:31 PM


Dream Weaver's Snowy Night of Magic

The darkness of the night sky is
lit with millions of brilliant stars
filling the expanse of the sky
as they cast a magic over the new
fallen snow with a brightness
reflected by the glow of the full moon

As she leans back she hears the creak
of leather seats in this beautiful
red sleigh sent to take her to
she knows not where except her
girlfriend sent a message that she
would meet her there for the party

She closes her eyes and allows her senses
to be filled with the magic of the ride
as she breathes the crisp, night air
mixed with the scent of pine as they
pass through the woods and into a clearing
taking them over the fields of unbroken whiteness

The movement of the sleigh is steady
rocking her gently as the horse moves
forward at a smooth pace along the
trail previously made by others as
they too are out on this magical
night with full moon and stars shining bright

The snow crunches beneath the skis
of the sleigh lending a gentle sound
that further lulls her into a state
of deep contentment as she snuggles
into the warmth of the white fur
that is wrapped so beautifully around her

With eyes closed she sighs
letting her thoughts drift to her dreams
where a magical feeling of serenity
flows through her transporting her to a past
where the world still has time
for the sweet joys of a winter sleigh ride

Feeling the sleigh slow its pace
and hearing a pounding sound she opens
her eyes to see coming towards them
a rider sitting tall on a large,
dark horse which brings a smile to her face
for this lends greater magic to her night ride

Karen TorbiakĀ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-12-01 12:41 PM


Karen,
Well if your dreaming you might as well dream good. Lovely enjoyed. *L*

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-12-01 01:33 PM


You create such quality romantic dreams...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-12-01 01:39 PM


Magic, snow, and a tall stranger on a horse...
Can't get any better than that Karen!
Very well done...love it!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Startime
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4 posted 2001-12-01 01:47 PM


Seymour...*grin* yes, and I so love to weave these kind of dreams. I hope you stay tuned..there is more of this story to come.**hugs**

James...Thank you so much. I am so glad you like the way I weave romance...just can't help myself...I just love these kind of dreams. **hugs**

Nancy...Stay tuned the magic has just begun...this poem/story will have a few surprises in it and of course plenty love and romance. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-12-01 05:05 PM


Sounds like you and Santa have something going on  
Love this.
Sandra

Martie
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6 posted 2001-12-01 07:57 PM


Karen--Sounds like a beautiful beginning to a romance in snow.  
Eloise
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7 posted 2001-12-01 08:00 PM


Don't wake up this is a beautiful dream.  
Startime
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8 posted 2001-12-01 08:39 PM


Snadra...*grin* well there certainly will be some magic on this snowy night. **hugs** I am so glad you like it.

Martie...I just love romance and somehow the vision of a this kind of thing just fills me with awe. I am glad you are enjoying it. **hugs**

Eloise...Don't you just love dreams that are filled with so much love and romance. **hugs** The next part is coming up.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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