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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2001-11-30 10:35 AM


Everything changes,
So why does it seem the same,
Words rearranges,
It’s a melody of pain,
Sung softly and all alone,
From some new pages
Chiseled in a heart of stone.

Acappella night
The nightingale makes no sound,
Candles give no light,
Soon the moment can’t be found
As everything wraps us tight,
Molten stone flows down
A single voice glowing bright.

The silence then fills
As sounds echo in your head,
The stone once more chills,
All fades with a sense of dread
Emotions broken now spills,
Recalls all t’was said,
Then the soft song silence kills

Gloom
inspired by Serenity’s poem
“acapella in the night”




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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-30 10:41 AM


I love that you were inspired by her because this is an absolutely wonderful poem. Music flows through it, my friend, and I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-11-30 11:37 AM



And a wonderful inspiration it was...this puts a bit of whip cream on the Sundae...

Sven
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3 posted 2001-11-30 12:25 PM


inspired indeed. . .

well done. . . the chorus answered. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-11-30 01:45 PM


I LOVE when ya do this! I'm flattered to know that you can take my musings and write something with so much depth. Thank you, Prof, I enjoyed much. HUGS.
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Gaia
5 posted 2001-11-30 02:46 PM


Thank you for this sweet song this morning.
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-11-30 03:28 PM


it's quite lovely, Professor.  Isn't it wonderful to be inspired by another poet!

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

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