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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Crush By: Noah Eaton 11/29/01 Follow me It feels so right The way you touch me And set my heart aflame It’s cold outside When you stand aside Holding my hand And look into your eyes Is your love real Or am I musing We’re dancing The North Star is a Solomon Seal Blinking, winking I love you It feels so haunted But this love is true So follow me love… My love I’m pleading on my knees Take me for who I am If there’s no tomorrow Would you tell me how sweet It feels to love you Hold me… Love me… My love… Now I’m wondering As long as the sun will rise I will be here for you always Looking into your beautiful eyes Am I out of luck Or is there still plenty of time Is this a dream Or is it reality? Sing to me, love You’re everything I need I fall in love with you more everyday If I can survive Another evening I will cherish all my love to you Come now Deep down You’re with me Now I’m wondering As long as the sun will rise I will be here for you always Looking into your beautiful eyes Am I out of luck Or is there still plenty of time Tell me Is this a dream Or is it reality? My sweet angel This spark that I am feeling The way I melt for you I believe That we are meant to be All this magic in the air shows me How I love you Hold me Kiss me My love… Now I’m wondering As long as the sun will rise I will be here for you always Looking into your beautiful eyes Am I out of luck Or is there still plenty of time Tell me Is this a dream Or is it reality? You are the girl of my dreams How you make my heart sing To have you I would give anything How I fall for you Or is it a moment too soon? Everyday, I contemplate How I love you… So much This simple crush… |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Noah.....I love this...is it a song?? This is the second one of yours today to read like a song....this floats like a waltz....  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Happiness is a crush...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Noah....Love it! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
A crush makes you feel like your floating throught the sky. peaches |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like this, sounds like a song indeed! I think your crush likes you too *wink |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a beautiful request you make here, Noah, to your lady love. I hope it turns into the most perfect romance. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is so romantic. May your love bloom in this winter season as if there was springtime in the air. Very well done, Noah. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - I'm glad that I found this one of your writings. I pray that you and her are together. And perhaps, it is just not only a crush... BC |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh Noah... This is sooo sweet!! But are you sure this is just a simple crush?? From past experience, my crushes never have happy ending, they're just... crushes.  If this is your love life you're describing, I hope with all my heart that it'll have a good and happy ending. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This doesn't sound like a simple crush to me. Sounds like real love. This is very good. I like it. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, this is lovely. LOVE crushes are never simple. Long distance love crushes are the hardest to make into reality. But these fingers are crossed, for you and your sweet lady, that this dream crush may become real. |
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