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Lucie
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0 posted 2001-11-28 05:47 PM


She laughed out loud,
like tiny invisible fingers were working her ribs.
The giggle was infectious,
making me smile
and then guffaw right along with her.

Our humor lost on the strangers on the street,
their funnybones buried deep within.

I love to laugh like that,
your chest filling with air
and then exploding into sound
until every bit of breath has left you
and you are clutching your stomach
and moaning.

And yet, the laughter continues,
until you calm down
and then
completely by accident
your eyes meet
and you begin
again.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-11-28 06:07 PM


Oh, Lucie, you have captured the essence of spontaneous, belly-driven laughter.
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-11-28 06:20 PM


as do I, thank you for reminding me how infectious and healing laughter is!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-11-28 06:26 PM


Isn't that always the way
Well done Cowgirl

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Larry C
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4 posted 2001-11-29 12:25 PM


Lucie,
See, I knew we had some things in common. Gotta covet moments like these!  

Abigaile
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since 2001-10-21
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5 posted 2001-11-29 01:09 PM


Beautiful imagery. *BIG WARM HUGS*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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