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what would ee have thought?
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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i wonder what ee would have thought about this (if, of course he stillthought) you see, ee thought a lot about poetry so much so that he created it in his own image poetry -------> ee ee <------- poetry like a magic mirrorrorrim that reflecteddetcelfer words into the mind into those hid (pla ces) den that no one e v e r thought of lOOking so, again i ask what would ee have thought of this (if, of course he still thought) ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
he would have smiled..as I have *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If one of the goals of the writer is to have the readers attention and to leave an impression on them....guess what.... ee is okee dokee....thanx Sven. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I may not understand it, but I like it! *smiles* ~Tier |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i'll tell you what ee would have thought.... he would be proud to be your inspiration.... WONDERFUL!!!!!!!, Sven!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, another one of my favorite poets, ee. You have done him justice in this one, great write. Sandra |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oh yes, he would have stood right up and clapped, clapped, clapped.....  FANTASTIC Greeneyes~  [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ee would possibly s h o u t yay ee! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
[s]he with [ee] tinks moch....of it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ee wOOd have thought ee'd 'eard th' GR8 VoIcE ov th' Northlands |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* I don't know what ee thought but I sure smiled through this one. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your words of art.... excellent as always my dear friend. Charisma~*TMP*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this Sven! It's pure magic!! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well..I've been away for a few days, and miss your work very much. How wonderful to come back to something that seems to be just perfectly you. I love this!  Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks everyone. . . ee has always been one of my favorites. . . and one of my biggest influences. . . if I could ever write a poem as passionate as "somewhere i have never travelled" or one that's as challenging as "g-r-a-s-s-o-p-h-e-r", then I will have arrived. . . thanks again. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Sven, i think you have arrived, in my opinion...i must confess that i used to disregard ee as pretentious but my opinion of him has changed for the better, largely thanks to you... |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, I loved it! It was great. Keep it up.  Laura |
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