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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-28 11:19 AM



Touch
me...
so
that
I may
draw
my
first
breath

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-11-28 11:21 AM


WOW!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-28 11:29 AM


Oh my gosh.......so powerful. Absolutely stunning. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-11-28 11:32 AM


Very nice...


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4 posted 2001-11-28 11:34 AM


this is awesome..it proves that saying a little bit goes a long way!
Enjoyed!

CocoBaci
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5 posted 2001-11-28 02:55 PM


OUTSTANDING high praise2u my dearPoetFriend cuz this is fantastic...
Treasure chest this one goes AWC...

Hugs2u
*~coco~*

RSWells
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6 posted 2001-11-28 03:02 PM


Very romantic.
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with you
7 posted 2001-11-28 03:57 PM


echoes here
wow
this is so romantic  
loved this  

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
8 posted 2001-11-28 05:53 PM


taking bows....
thank you...

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Duncan
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9 posted 2001-11-29 01:51 AM


Who is breathless now?
rwood
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10 posted 2001-11-29 07:12 AM


Bravo! More!  

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Larry C
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11 posted 2001-11-29 10:05 AM


A Whisper's Caress,
An awesome invitation!

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
12 posted 2001-11-30 03:00 PM


thank you everyone, so glad you liked it.  

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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