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RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2001-10-06 07:22 PM

Pick me apart like petals of a rose
piece by peice
when nothing is left
that is when you'll cease

You crave my life as your own
in your mind you are superior
i'm supposed to hand it over
feeling inferior

My nerves bunching into a ball
tangling around eachother..thickening..
Swallow some of your own medicine
I gag, for it is sickening

The light is red
yet you push the limits, you keep going
you should obey me like a traffic light
instead you nauseate me without knowing

I should attempt a new search
seek someone better
I was caught in the storm of you
Must've been asleep through that weather

You handed me a glass of wine
seemingly poisoned, I drank
a love once smooth sailing
wasn't destined to be, it sank

I'm a shiny red mercedes benz
soon as I let my guard down
you take advantage, losing control
Until you crashed, wrecking parts of me
the car damaged on the outside
I am damaged inside
but if you study me it shows on the outside..

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-06-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-06 07:25 PM

I'm a shiny red mercedes benz
soon as I let my guard down
you take advantage, losing control
Until you crashed, wrecking parts of me
the car damaged on the outside
I am damaged inside
but if you study me it shows on the outside..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
No one should feel this way. Take care my friend. ~warm hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

2 posted 2001-10-06 07:35 PM

Oh Sweetie, my heart goes out to you.
~hugs, Marie~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

3 posted 2001-10-07 06:33 PM

Tight poem as usual. Keep doing your thing.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-10-07 08:33 PM

Cool poem! I really enjoyed
the way you wrote this, some
great anaolgies..you leave your
readers (at least this one) looking
forward to reading more of your work!!

take care.
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your
pain to
pleasure.
Fill up your
days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

5 posted 2001-10-07 10:00 PM

I know that pain.
It will heal and get better †
LITL,
Heather (aka CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-10-08 01:07 AM

Powerful thoughts here. I've felt the exact ones myself (in the process of seperation now). These words really speak to me.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2001-10-09 12:59 PM

Hey everyone! Thank you for your kind replies...Its nice to know that you all can relate to this and I am not alone!
Thanks again and I hope you continue reading my posts : )

RosePetal

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