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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-05 10:00 PM

He walks two steps forward, backwards three
as he wonders what he wants from me
To forget him and the love we've known
or to come back and renew seeds sown?

He's insecure, does he really want
to bend his will, allow hearts absconce?
Open the door he once closed so tight
or continue to live empty nights?

Not alone we, just lonely in truth
for chance to love as we did in youth.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-05 10:05 PM

if you still love him, take the chance

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2001-10-05 10:06 PM

Lovely sweet and very poetic I like it esspecailly since I have a few uncertainties of my own. Well done.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-05 10:18 PM

He walks two steps forward, backwards three
as he wonders what he wants from me
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Sounds as though he is doing the dance of life here. Grab hold and waltz him into the moonlight. Lovely write here Sandra.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-06 12:10 PM

So much pondering in this write. But uncertainties are worth taking a chance on.

He walks two steps forward, backwards three
as he wonders what he wants from me

I love those lines

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-10-06 10:40 AM

I'll be the first to tell you that it's worth the chance. . .

wonderfully done, and it's normal. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2001-10-06 11:50 AM

Sometimes a "point-blank confrontation" saves a lot of time and energy, as long as one is resolved to accept the outcome...

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-10-06 12:22 PM

this is a story in the making..and I am reading and waiting... and wishing for you happiness deserved. *huggs*
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-10-06 03:46 PM

You've captured this heartening dilemma beautifully Sandra ... it is so easy to go back to what is comfortable, yet so difficult to know if it is right. Very well written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2001-10-06 03:53 PM

Take the chance, attempt the dance.

"Not alone we, just lonely in truth
for chance to love as we did in youth"

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

10 posted 2001-10-06 03:58 PM

Lovely write! Take that chance. You just never know!

warm smiles,
~Marie~

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