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sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

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Fl. sunshines early mist

0 posted 2001-10-05 12:52 PM

Bittersweet Tears

This world holds many sorrows
for in this life today
there will be no tomorrows
with loved ones parted this day.

Bittersweet tears shall flow
beautiful memories we shared
why does the time move so slow
for all those who really cared?

Butterfly kisses for you my dear
as I gaze into the sky
you shall always be very near
as teardrops fill my eyes.

I will carry you in my heart
till that day we shall meet again
for us; we shall never part
God will decide when.

Farewell my darling
memories lasting through the years
butterfly kisses...
bittersweet tears.

~sunshinemist~

(c)2001 Marie C.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

1 posted 2001-10-05 01:00 PM

Marie - It sounds as though you have some healing to do. The timbre of this poem is perfect for the emotions you convey.

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

2 posted 2001-10-05 01:04 PM

LngJhnAg, I have long ago been healed, just thought to share this with someone who has lost a loved one. Thank you for reading.

smiles,
~Marie~

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
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3 posted 2001-10-05 01:28 PM

Marie,

it is so well received today, thank you!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-10-05 03:44 PM

...like a semi-sweet smile in a moment of pensive silence...

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

arthur
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

5 posted 2001-10-05 04:20 PM

thankyou
not much more needs saying
arthur

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-10-05 05:40 PM

Lady of Shallot,

You are very welcome, thank you for reading.

Warm hugs,
~Marie~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mark,

Thank you, that was a beautiful expression.

Warm smiles,
~Marie~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Arthur,

Thank you for reading.

Warm smiles,
~Marie~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-05 07:25 PM

This is filled with such tender emotion Marie ... very nicely written indeed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

8 posted 2001-10-06 09:27 AM

Kit, thank you so much for the read. At the time I wrote it, my heart was indeed breaking. Time heals everything.

Warm hugs,
~Marie~

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